Ryan white a very influential young man who tried to live a regular life with Aids, who was discriminated against, took his case to courts for the rights to attend school, spoke to the courts for the rights to attend school, spoke to the National Commission, caught the medias attention,and changed public perception of Aids victims which resulted into the Ryan White Care Act.
Revised Thesis Statement
By fighting for his right to attend school, Ryan White, thirteen-year-old Aids victim, changed the publics perception of Aids victims.
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I like your revised thesis because it is simple and grammatically correct.
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